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Underwater Adventure

Snorkeling can be one of the most amazing adventures you can ever take part in. 1) Floating on the water and watching the fish swim below you is a unique experience. It is normal to be nervous in 

the beginning, but once you are in the water, the anxiety goes away as you slowly notice the new world around you. Coral reefs are the best places to snorkel because hundreds, sometimes thousands, of fish and other sea creatures live among the coral. 2) Depending on where you snorkel, you can see tiny squids, turtles, sea cucumbers, lobsters, and many other animals.

3) I saw a shark the last time I was snorkeling, and it really scared me. It is truly a beautiful sight, one that you can hardly believe is happening. When you are underwater, the world you know is blocked out, and the silence makes the overall experience more magical. If you want to have one of the most beautiful experiences that anyone can ever have, you should try snorkeling for a day.

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